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Fins of golden whales
splashing up pale, dark waters.
They're massive gods of light
bathing serenly above
deserted backdoor windows.
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This is another tanka for the combined project with ~ThePatriarch. This one goes along with the photograph called Backdoor View- [link]

How do you think this works with the photograph? To you, is it a good interpretation? Critiques strongle appreciated

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:icondolucem:
Very nicely done.

I wouldn't have immediately thought of the whales, but as soon as I looked at the pic again, I feel like it works really well. I really like that actually... it's not cliche and in fact makes me really think harder about the photo and the deep spaces beneath your the words.

:)
:icondolucem:
Nicely done.

Beautifully done actually. The pairing makes me think deeply about the photo and your words... hmm I REALLY like it.
:iconthescallywag:
thats a cool interpretation. I could see it that way easily, i think it fits quite well, i wouldn't change a thing.

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