Fins of golden whales
splashing up pale, dark waters.
They're massive gods of light
bathing serenly above
deserted backdoor windows.

Fins of golden whales splashing up pale, dark waters. They're massive gods of light bathing serenly above deserted backdoor windows. |

Author's Comments
This is another tanka for the combined project with ~ThePatriarch. This one goes along with the photograph called Backdoor View- [link]
How do you think this works with the photograph? To you, is it a good interpretation? Critiques strongle appreciated |
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Comments
I wouldn't have immediately thought of the whales, but as soon as I looked at the pic again, I feel like it works really well. I really like that actually... it's not cliche and in fact makes me really think harder about the photo and the deep spaces beneath your the words.
Beautifully done actually. The pairing makes me think deeply about the photo and your words... hmm I REALLY like it.
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